I erased everything on the white board yesterday. the timeline didn’t make sense, the motivations were off, and it felt very disjointed.
after sitting on it for a day, the timeline is a bit more solid, the plot tightened, character motivations are more believable as well as pushing the plot forward, and I even created a new character. he still needs a backstory/voice, but his function is decided. let’s see if it sticks. also, maybe making the Virgin Mary an antagonist.
3/3/14 mon. and 3/4/14 tues. The Terrible Infant.